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請幫我改改下面英文錯誤的地方 ..

請告訴我應該怎樣寫會比較順暢 ..

滿分五分這樣寫大概可以拿幾分?

請告訴我寫的文章中文法的錯誤!!

那個 .. 句子沒有連在一起就別見怪了(指
我只是想方便各位大大批改而已(小聲

拜託請告訴我作文裡的「文法錯誤」
不要只有幫我改寫啊

感恩

請問：如果俺把題目的圖片跟大家講，大大們會比較好修改我的作文嗎？

第一張圖片：
一張課程表

第二張圖片：
有一間補習班，周圍有很多學生(?

第三張圖片：
主角準備上床睡覺，時鐘顯示晚上十一點。

My school life is very busy because I have a lot of things to do every day.
I always have four class at morning and another three in the afternoon.
After school, I have to go to the cram to learn another things.
I go to bed at eleven o'clock every day.
What a busy day is!

補習班是cram，還是 .. 有別的名稱(?

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